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Re: Hooves and Heels
Orren saw as some of his centaurs grabbed some humans as they ran off. Verdandi managed to grab the doctor and get her on her back. Good. The doctor's healing ...
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Re: The Forest of Eternal Depression
Hi there StrangeGirl. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this isn't really doing much for me. I think a lot of the problem with that ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: A Seasonal Answer
Hi there, Galerius. Just thought that I would pop in and give this a quick review. So, I really like this poem. It reminds me a lot of some Chinese ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: What we want.
Hello, Noksha! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I'm trying to figure out what is up with this poem. I'm not sure just what you ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Cattails
Hi there, Bear! Glad to see you posting again! I'm going to get right down to this and review it. So, I liked this story. It's very simple and heartfelt. ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Sheild Maiden
Hi there shineondiamondeyes. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this is too short, in my opinion. You really need to expand on this. You have quite ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: You Can Never Really Leave
The train had not yet arrived at the station. The thin fog of the morning was only just beginning to fade. Juliana hoped that it would not leave before she ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Rain
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Hooves and Heels
Orren looked around. They did not have a few minutes. They had to get going now. There was no way that they were going to be able to stand against ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds kind of bland. 3/10. Just cause I'd flip through it to see the good parts. Canter
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Name the Character Above You
Pitterpeep. An adolescent merman, with short grey hair and a black fish tail. He's impulsive and used to having his own way. Likes to adorn himself with whatever jewelry he ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: funny words
Huge is kind of funny. :P
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Hooves and Heels
Orren nodded his head at Verdandi's statement. This was indeed a beautiful part of the land. After the elvish advance had been halted, and that horrid race driven back to ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Hooves and Heels
Orren nodded his head at Verdandi's statement. This was indeed a beautiful part of the land. After the elvish advance had been halted, and that horrid race driven back to ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Dancers in the Darkness
Hi there, Jennafina! It's me, and I'm here to review this. So, I really like this. It's got a good balance between description, narrative, and dialogue, which I think is ...
Jan 26, 2010
